CaitE Baloney

Thank you guys so much. I will definitely be paying more attention to the characters and trying not to make them seem to cliched. I also agree how some of ...

Wow, I really enjoyed that. I hope that you continue because you have a great start here. Everyone else has commented and I don't have any nit-picks. So great job ...

I liked it a lot personally. It was different and sad. A little confusing sometimes but then it all neatens out at the end. I loved the ending no matter ...

That was awesome I have not read anything like that on this cite. All I can say is wow. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great ...

Wow I liked that. It puts a new perspective on how you might look at things and since nobody really see's the queen's side of things it is different. It ...

Wow that was really great. I haven't really been on this site all that often lately so I haven't read anything in a while from here. Now more about you ...

I liked this a ton. I would definatly read the other parts. Of course everyone has already said everything that I have wanted, so keep up the good work and ...

Hi, First of all I would like to say that I really like the theme to this poem. It made me think about the person in the poem. I liked ...

Hi, That was great. I really like how you went through the seasons and then the part about the space. My favorite stanza would have to be the second. Again ...

Nice job, I acually really like this in all its insane confusion. I didn't find anything to critique on though I am not very good at finding grammar mistakes. I ...

Thanks for the critique I haven't written much poetry. Cait

Hi Very good start. Though I did think it was a bit confusing in the beginning. Overall however, you put a good voice into it and it was well written ...

That was really sad but great. I like the beginning and it didn't give away anything to soon. The ending was a bit quick, though I liked it. Keep up ...

I think that this was a very good piece. I especially like the ending. It shows how good a person you are. The writing itself was great. All I can ...

Wow, that was awesome. I really liked the fairy tail feel of the whole thing, you don't find stories like that very often. I guess that is all I have ...